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Play Lazer Tag in a Dress

I'm the type of girl
who smokes
Smartie wrappers
not pot
Drinks apple juice
not jungle juice
And thinks candy
cigs are
the stuff

I play lazer tag in
my favorite dress
Society screams
what we need to do
and have to have
But I do everything
backwards
and
upsidedown

I Pop gumballs
not pills
I'm high
off life
And I wear my
favorite white pants
before labor day

Tell me different?

I'll still play lazer tag in
my favorite dress
And society still screams
what we need to do
and have to have
But I still do everything
backwards
and
upsidedown

I dance
with my friend
not a pole
I eat as much
as I want
not 1 carb a day
And I spend
my friday nights
sober
not drunk

Tell me different?

I'll still play lazer tag in
my favorite dress
And society will never
give it a rest
And I'll forever do everything
backwards
and
upsidedown

I'll always
play lazer tag
in my
favorite dress!


Author notes

Human by Skye Sweetnam

It's not all intense and in depth and it doesn't contain big words.
But it's a little fun song, and it does have a message. :]

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Comments


  • Shatter.Me.Fast
    May 2

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    When I read this I had the perfect picture of an innocent teenage girl in my head...
    And theres not many of those...
    I was so drawn into this, it all flowed together so well that I just had to finish it!(;
    I love your work and I plan on reading more of it!


  • Progandother
    May 1

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    ...haha...don't worry I'm not going to mark you down dramatically just because it doesn't contain big words...

    ...I honestly think you interpreted the song very well...I can see the rhythm of the verses in the songs within the poems and then the rearrangement of words to add your own spin on the chorus...

    ...you've also got the antonyms of comparing something child like with something else that would be considered malicious which is also a very nice touch...

    ...you also get extra pluses because you're the only person so far that made a poem from scratch...and the smiley sun background is just so amazing that words could not describe it...

    ...don't put yourself down I think this is very spot on in saying what the song had...

    Oliver