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Rainbow Kiss

The rainbow kiss, from the lovers afar.
The sweetest bliss, I hold in a jar.
The passionious wait, cornered by walls.
Open the door, and for you I will fall.
Catch me with the getle touch, and with that rainbow kiss.
The one I love so much, the one from your lips.
Like a butterfly in the wind, flapping her wings,
I never though it was the things you did, had me realize everything.
Every day is a new reality, that only you can bring.
With that lovely rain bow kiss, makes me dance and sing.
The compassion of love, and the sight of your heart.
The beauty in your eyes, I loved you from the start.
The cold fire rose, as I hid behind the tree.
I saw you disappear, and come next to me.
What is stained in my heart, is the pen that wrote with your blood.
Forever with that rainbow kiss, you are the one I love.

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  • An intresting way to use the titlle. It is a very talented write but i think at hte 1st tge rhyme was a bit much. But over all a wonderful read.

    Thanks for the Entry.
    Kathryn.