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A New Sun, a Ray of Hope

In a world of dark and confusing roads,
where pain is the oxygen we live and breath,
our last rays of hope have begun to erode
and will soon result in our inevitable death.

We wander aimlessly to find a new light.
Crashing, stumbling, and falling in the dark.
There are those of us with hope, trying to fight
hoping to start a wildfire with our single spark.

The night became the darkest right before the dawn
and finally in the distance a new star has spawn

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  • Lexicats
    May 15
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    NICE

    really good baby i like it