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A cry for help...

This is my last cry for help.
This is my last try at living.
This is my last poem im writing.
Unless someone helps me.
So help me.
Please.
Please help me. Im dying here,
Im dying...

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  • ULikeDont i
    May 1
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    i know you wrote this a while ago but this is one of your poems i don't like. it's sad and depressing and basically a lie because you have writing other poems , you are still living and i'll always help you.

    love you tye
    i mean it
    but not like that (nasty)
    quazza


  • Coloured Skies
    May 1

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    Awwwwh,
    I don't know weather I can actually help. I never really do sadly, but what I can say is Dont give up dont die. You can get through this...fight and stay strong I know you can do it! .