You make me feel right in so many ways,
I hope were together for all of our days.
Too many times Ive had love go wrong,
feeling this way has been so long.
When ever you smile my day seems bright,
It also feels great to cuddle all night.
I vow to make you happy in every single way,
and to make you feel good every single day.
You do great with the kids, they see the good in you,
it takes a real man to do the things that you do.
So, what I am saying is that I love you so much,
from the love that you show and your warm and gentle touch.
A contest entry
- Make It Rhyme! make it good. Almost any subject allowed! by PurpleSky.
800 points, ended May 1, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is a very sweet and endearing poem, I particularly liked the first two lines! Thanks for entering our contest!
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the flow of this poem was right on except for the last line would make it perfect if it read
from the love that you show and your warm gentle touch
only suggestion other than that this was a sweet, loving and endearing poem with great rhyme and flow. thanks for entering and good luck
huggles
Lena -
Ah..the warm poetry and the wonderful feelings abbout the beauty of the love..love the depth and the closeness you have shared..well done..
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