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Together As One

It’s late
And their alone
He pulls her close
And whispers in her ear
"I love you so much
And tonight is all about us"
His body is pushed against hers
Her arms are locked around his neck
And she’s up on her tippy toes
His arms are around her waist
And are slowly inching up
And down her back
With each stroke
They become more and more
Intertwined with each other
He touches and teases
With the desire to please
Her hands moved with his
In soft motions all over her body
He picks her and lays her on the bed
Slowly crawling on top of her
Seeing in her eyes that she needs him
She intertwines her hands with his
And he forcefully moves them
Above her head and holds them there
Restraining her; Holding her down
Their breathing together as one
Their bodies moving in rhythmic motions
Sweaty and heavy; together as one
Her soft screams and his soft moans
The room is hot and it’s getting hotter
Their minds and souls are on the same wave
It’s coming up really close to that time
All together all at once
With great sighs of pleasure



It’s over......

Author notes

not very good but yea...im not too sure on the title i dont think it really fits with the poem....plus this is just bad all the way around lol

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  • actually i don't think it's bad at all! sure it could use a little more detail, but i liked it!
    it make me think of a couple completely in love with each other, truly in love....
    i think it's a beautiful write!
    thanx for sharing with me!