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What feels right, is probably wrong

I know my limits
And that this shouldnt get to me
But its hard to fool yourself
When you thought it was meant to be

Well im not ready to forgive
Atleast not at this moment
I deserve a few answers
'cause i thought this was God sent

I did everything that i could
And im doing everything that I can
But it wasnt enough
And you fell for another man

Tell me darlin'
What went through your head
And was that an act
Or were you really upset?

I dont have an idea
Of what my emotions are
All I know is
That I never go far

Do you really
Care for me
Or are were you lying
'cause I thought it was meant to be

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