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Scattered Dreams (April 30 NaPoMo ... final poem of the month)



scattered dreams
turned rancid and meek
amidst the warped cycle -
bathing in the sweat
of death’s decay

like an eternal jigsaw puzzle
spawned from the dawn of mankind
incomplete
without basic primal
necessities

humanity

humility

makes peace

the cosmic tune goes on
and players’ dance
through an eternity of hatred
from father to son
and on to the end of time
the song spewing like blood
from a ground too wounded
to recognize or recover
the beauty that
graced its hills
for a brief period
in the history
of us all


Author notes

Thirty days of laughs, tears, cursing and ignoring the computer because I didn't want to write. Thirty days of forcing a poem to come out... sometimes easily with no effort at all, and other times putting down such crud that I know I'll look back on in a while and think 'what the hell was I thinking????' .....

NaPoMo... I had a frigging blast!!!!

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  • abu nuwas
    September 10
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    Too deep

    for me. And yet...mmmmm.......hurrumph....yep


  • arafura gold member
    June 1

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    "the cosmic tune goes on
    and players’ dance
    through an eternity of hatred
    from father to son
    and on to the end of time..."

    Wow... wonderful writing Barbara. Very impressive.