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Time (April 29 NaPoMo)


the pendulum swings
the stairs creak
with ideas and images
motions that speak

inner turmoil
outer view
secrets kept
and told to you

hush hush
say no more
a quick farewell
and nothing more

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ticking of the clock

time ~whirls~ by
like a jackal on speed

a month ago was just
yesterday

now today is tomorrow
the day that never comes

as the door slips shut -
anon

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  • abu nuwas
    September 10
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    Lovely

    Quite beautiful, restrained, probing, yet not foolishly obscure


  • MissyYates
    June 11

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    inner turmoil
    outer view
    secrets kept
    and told to you

    I love this stanza most of all! You never know how much turmoil others hold inside just by looking at them. Nice description of time slipping away.

  • J Macabre gold member
    May 1

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    This is interesting. Kind of like speaking of the cycle of life and the limited time involved with it.