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Column #1

These Impulses so unknown,
Oh the status strangely confused,
Gaining ground, I see the sun,
Everyone sees false truth.
Tomorrow, another day,
Happiness, welcoming in,
Eternally immortal through bliss.
Remember that we are strong.
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Author notes

possibly obvious meaning, we'll see though haha.

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  • dutch2lips gold member
    July 29
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    i have not a clue about the message you have behind this poem
    thank you for entering