Yeah...I know the stars in heaven shine real bright
But...will you be alright in the noise without the lights?
Going down...
Past the endless afternoon
Looks Like You Didn't Make It
I guess they don't have much room
You had a husband
And a love you were supposed to have
But you became a lost soul
And they go somewhere else
A place where the daylight don't last
Once my reality becomes yours
There's no going back
You can lose your mind here
And that'll be that
There will be other things that will go missing too
Like the books that you want to read
That candle will go out
When the eyes start to bleed
The others will be missing you
But their words...you won't hear
Those wishes and prayers won't be recognized here
For six months out of the year
You can sway in the wind's breeze
And dance with your mother's trees
But when six months are up...Persephone
You'll be back down here with me
I’ve come to love you too much
And now I can finally dream
What did you think
Comments
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Vivid imagery
The third stanza is well penned
I can relate
Thanks for the share
Darky


