At midnight on the harvest moon when night replaces day
It’s then the Kittsalfly will come to frolic and to play
Awaking from its slumber in the valley of the moon
It only has one night of fun that passes all too soon
It runs and tumbles through the sky while chasing shooting stars
Then swats the planets all around, first Jupiter then Mars
It sneaks up on a comet just to pull its fiery tail
Then playfully it runs away leaving a stardust trail
But when it needs to take a break from all its fun and play
The Kittsalfly will take a cool drink from the Milky Way
When the night comes to an end and it is time to rest
Then it returns back to its home and its warm starlit nest
Until the harvest moon returns and midnight rolls around
The Kittsalfly will dream of play and slumber safe and sound
So on that magic night my dears if you will watch the sky
Then you might be the one to see the magic Kittsalfly
In a list
A contest entry
- Make It Rhyme! make it good. Almost any subject allowed! by PurpleSky.
800 points, ended May 1, 17 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Gold And Silver Trophy Poems! by MJ Forgives.
700 points, ended December 1, 228 entries
• next poem in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
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This is great but then all your poems are. I always enjoy everyone!
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Awww cute,
This is awesome.
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Totally Awesome!
Hello Steve,
I'm not on here very much anymore but I love it when I do pop in and see an awesome poem like this from you! Your imagination is outstanding and as always, your rhyme & flow were superb! Congrats on taking the gold, it is well deserved. Keep up the great work!
Don
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darling. absolutely darling. congrats. Love,
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I featured this poem for you because it was so fantastic. I had no idea this was your entry and was pleased to see it ended up being you! My 12 year old daughter now has a favorite poem
thanks again and God bless!
Lena -
This has to be the most adorable thing I have ever read!!! Words can not describe how much I love this poem!! The only thing I can say is just WOW.
Thank you so much for entering our contest and bringing this adorable creature to life!
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Super cute....
What an adorable write. It flows and rhymes perfectly and I wish you the best of luck
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being a...
...hypercritical prick, I have to say old lad, that you have written better flowing pieces.
It's unfortunate in your case, because you are normally so close to perfection as to make no difference - but I don't believe this piece is up to your usual impeccable standards.
Forgive me if I'm wrong, but I believe you wrote this in a hurry.
It's still good - just not perfect!
kind regards,
Robin.
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This is adorable, and while the story is for children, the imagery and beauty can be seen by anyone. A most enjoyable read!!
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Delightful
Love your imagination with this piece. Would make purrfect night time read to a small child - rhythm and rhyme just right and not too long. Enjoyed reading it .
Cheers
Anne
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What a pleasure...
Dancing through your poem and having a wonderful time! 
A delectable write, such fun! 
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sorry forgot to add WOW!
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I absolutly love the imagination in this piece. I adore the name you came up with for this creature and think it reads in perfect meter, rhyme and flow!! bravo for you. This seriously made me say awwwwwwww! I loved it and thank you so much for your entry
huggles
Lena
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