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Only her I see

a vision she truly is
my eyes are filled with love
her smell her voice her loving heart
what joy comes to my soul
whenever she comes near

my heart stops upon
the thought of losing her
so every moment I charish
savering her sweet presents
glad that she is by my side

at times I wonder what I've done
to desirve such whole
fullfiling loving care
the only wish upon my heart
is to give the same to her

bliss is just the word for it
content and happy I be
I notice no others presents
these eyes this heart
it's her that is all I need

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For my dear AP wife. Love you Tory

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  • Manicmuze
    May 17

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    This is really a lovely romantic poem. I noticed a couple of typo's (cherish) and (deserve)

    "the only wish upon my heart
    is to give the same to her"

    ...just beautiful.
    Nicely done, enjoyed it.
    ~ wendy

  • what a beautiful and touching tribute. so elegant and enlightening.


  • Puppydog gold member
    May 1
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    SO SWEET!!!!!

    It is a blessing indeed when one can bring such feelings to anothers heart.

  • Thanks Hon, this piece is so beautifully penned. Sweet emotion I can feel... I love it

    but more so,

    I love you