Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

my friend.


If you didn't mean it,
you shouldn't have said it
If you wouldn't have left it
I wouldn't have read it

The look in your eyes,
I could see the sorrow
you ask me so softly
if my heart you can borrow

For just a day,
or maybe a year
two or three
- what is it my dear?

You tell me you don't love me
anymore, at all
how could I have been so stupid
to let myself fall

in love.

You leave me crying,
trying
to make you stay
you hold nothing back
and walk away.

Alone
I am
once again.
left alone
myself,
my friend.



Can you read my other stuff and criticize based on that, too? I haven't written in a while.

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments