The truth is, I thought you trusted me
I thought you actually Believed me
I guess I was wrong
Every time I think you will be there,
You turn invisible and cower
I can see you now
All those years I believed in your Promises
-how when you moved away everything would be better
-How you would give me all I ever wanted
ALL LIES!
Did you ever truly trust me?
Have you ever looked at me and thought:
“She is Beautiful, Smart, and My Daughter”??
I truly DOUBT it.
In the end I have finally learned the truth
The You I saw was just a mask, a deception
Inside You are just like all the rest…
Heartless
Author notes
I wrote this about a family member of mine, it is a very personal poem. For those that have known me for a long time, they will probably be able to figure out who it is about.
If I could change one of my many poems in to a song, this would be one of them...not sure why, just thought it might sound good.
An opinion would be nice
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Yes I do remember your writes about this person. Such a deception really does hurt. Good to see you writing again. In the last stanza you have funally which should be finally. Good job of bringing out those feelings within you.
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Indeed it does. Thank you for taking the time to comment on my poem, I look forward to your comments the most, because they are very helpful. I was really in a dry spell for a very long time, but now I am starting to work again. I actually got a job as a character profiler... which has truly kept me buisy. xD (I also corrected that mistake, thanks for noticing for me!)
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YOUR POEM IS DEEP, HOWEVER YOUT TALKING ABOUT REALLY HIT THAT SPOT AND MESSED UP. I HOPE ALL GET BETTER
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I thank you for commenting on my poem. I have that hope as well, but I doubt it will happen.
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