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Never Ending Chase

Quick to find the end of the rainbow; those pesky leprechauns keep moving it!

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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    July 24
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    ROFL. This is hilarious. You did a fantastic job with just a simple line. And you did it so poetically. Amazing.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • RavenTheWhite
    May 2

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    very good in the poetic sense....great

    fellow poet the

  • pearlstp
    April 30
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    clever

    i like this (smilez)