Noela:
One day she thought she could tell him,
tell the guy she loved how she feels.
One day that she was confident, and knew that
it was real.
They had been friends forever,
they were only friends until now.
She knew that she loved him,
and she had to tell him somehow.
The boy(Jeremy):
This is the day he would tell her,
Tell Noela how he feels.
He was feeling very confident, and
knew that is was real.
They had been friends forever,
He trusted her most of all.
This is they day he would tell her,
it was destiny that seemed to call.
Together:
Jeremy I need to talk to you.
Theres something that needs to be said...
Noela I need to talk to you too.
In you I always depend...
Jeremy, We've been the best of friends,
and we will be till the end...
Noela, I know, and I need your advice,
because Im in love with your best friend.
Noela seemed to crumble,
as the words left Jeremy's mouth.
She never expected something like this,
reality, she wanted to doubt.
Jeremy watched Noela,
her smile began to sink.
Had he said something wrong?
He didn't know what to think.
She could'nt bring herself to tell him,
what she had felt all along.
Noela only smiled and nodded,
saying "My friend has liked you for so long..."
Author notes
One-sided love
A contest entry
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Comments
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Wow. This is very interesting and amazingly written. I didn't notice the rhyme until almost the end, which means you did a fantastic job on it. Amazing.
Write on.
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I LOVED THE STYLE!! IT WAS A VERY UNIQUE, WONDERFUL POEM!! WELL DONE




