Darkness,
This is my home now,
A fallen angel,
Cast from hope,
From love,
I travel this twisted path,
Each step,
Painful,
And my progress marked,
With my wretched blood,
Every step,
Let's another blade wring my heart,
And writh through my soul,
A piece of wicked steel,
From you,
Your the dim light in this darkness,
So far away,
I live to seek you,
Only to die for you,
You are my goal,
Yet the one driving these blades deeper,
Harder,
But the stronger my pain is,
So is my determination for you,
With each successful step,
I'm brutally punished,
With each promising bound,
I'm brought to my knees,
For you are my goal,
My punishment,
Every step I take closer,
Drives you back thousands more,
Ill gladly take the multitude of your pain,
And add it to mine,
Making your hell my heaven,
A wretched soul,
Wandering this twisted road,
Of shadow,
Of pain,
To you.....
Author notes
Shatter My Soul, Let My Heart Ache
A contest entry
- Shatter My Soul, Let My Heart Ache by Reaper-117.
1500 points, ended May 27, 106 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
...... ya idk.......
Comments
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A good read. I spotted a few typos throughout the poem, but can't hold that against you considering my own "superb" typing skills.
This poem was full of imagery and carried a message I really enjoyed.
Thanks for entering. -
i love this poem!!!
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woah, the emmotions and pain really got me.
"Let's another blade wring my heart"
^love it
really awesome poem and imagery, great ending too
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