The touch of your fingers
Plays let me feed you on my soft skin
I feel your hardness rubbing against my thigh
As your lips smother my erect nipples
My pussy on an all meat diet
Craving your animal flesh for protein
I spread my thick brown sugar thighs wide
For the main course of my dinner
You run the tip of your hardness
Between my swollen moist lips
Teasing my wanting entry way
You gently enter my estuary
My wet walls gulping down your beef
Overindulging on the feast inside me
Gripping your rigid ass drawing you into me
Telling you to give my tight pussy more
I bathe in our brackish sweat
As my fevered skin tingles
From the dropplets hitting my flesh
Feeling the steam rise from our bodies
Mmmmm..............
The electricity of fervor running through me
Swaddling my legs around your waist
While you stroke my inner panels faster
My smooth thighs start to tremble
Pushing my legs apart your tongue
Does its own ritual playing romper room
With my pulsating hard clit
As my pussy spits on the tip of your tongue
Mmmmmmm...............
Down on my knees I worship your dick
Swallowing it whole down my throat
Until I hear you cry OH GOD!
Sucking my juices off your hardness
You grab the back of my head
Clutching onto my hair
While your balls slap against my chin
Nutting down the back of my warm wet throat
Mmmmmmm................
Author notes
I do not claim the picture used with this write as my own. Picture found on yahoo images.
A contest entry
- Erotica? Why Not by Stolen memories.
400 points, ended May 7, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very sexy!
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Girl!!! This is hot! I love your poems.
"While your balls slap against my chin"
Damn!
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Oh My Word~
Is this legal
HOT piece with words that sizzle~ Yep...
I now am blinded by the Heat~
Image adds to the mental picture~
Sureeeeeee does~ Excellent Beautiful
Thank You for sharing Your Talent
Best wishes in the contest
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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Powerful Erotic Piece
Powerful, erotic piece this is. The imagery is very very strong all the way through. Passion rears its head in this piece in every word. Well done.
Dark Wishes
Wayne Leon
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Wow girl, that is one hell of a diet you have here, all meat.
Whew!!! Well Done
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you definitely got skill, girl, such imagery, such hotness ... whew.
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amazing!!!!
you got my animal hard here girl.....awesome piece of poetry.....gr8 work once again
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you did it again girl!
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Everything simply amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Everything simply amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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WhooooHooooo!
First I must say that this is a wonderful image to create a fantasy with
Very lovely imagery on this MsLady
Definately a winner in my eyes....
-E
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Luscious, descriptive, with a nice flourish to the wording, keeping it away from being straightforward or too blunt, which in this piece really adds to it.
Good write.
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at your best
you are the best
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MMMMMMMMMMM, INDEED!!!!!!!!
Damn, you making me hungry MISS HOT CHOCKLAT for a fest as fine as this - and OH what a fine feast it was in more ways than one, Baby. This entire piece smoked as i stroked from the get go and the picture of the sexy lady that went with it had me heart racing lit a hooking ladder on it's way to a smoldering fire. It's been too long since I've seen one of these EROTIC & NAUGHTY pieces from you BUT i will say it again as I may have said it before - it was certainly worth the wait and didn't disappoint one iota.
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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Whew!
Oh my that is hot. Such a great job you did. Best of luck in the contest.
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You gently enter my estuary. Mmm what
an intriguing concept. Loved this of course.
You delve deep into lascivious passions
which make the heart flutter and
the body ignite. Scrumptious as always.
Much love and kisses
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