Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Parks.

sun warm on my back
hot on my trail

adults swing on swing sets
grass cut
special needs blow dandelions
in my direction

goes,

"squee"

the heavy head turns back
and lets a low rumble

this is how we know
there's low tolerance
for disability

sun goes down
still hot on my trail

balance upon a steel rod
watching cars pass

goes,

"screech"

open mouth yawns
this is how we know
it's time to go home

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Chainsaw
    May 3
    Edit | Reply
    This is lovely, and kind of sad in a strange way.