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several dozen flaws

flaw number 4:
i fall in and out
of a hopeless infatuation
with everyone.
this habit is new, and
mostly unwelcome.

flaw number 11:
i am lazy, and lack motivation
for the simplest tasks.
i never have any money
but i won't get a job.
and i hate bumming rides from people,
but i won't get a license.

flaw number 17:
i try too hard sometimes,
and turn social situations
awkward.

flaw number 28:
i give people the wrong idea.
apparently i have not established
the difference between
"friendly" and "flirty".
the boys who pursue me
are never the one's i want.

flaw number 32:
i itch my legs til they bleed
and they look disgusting and scabby
all summer long.

flaw number 37:
my conscience is broken,
or my moral compass is off.
i don't feel bad for things
i should feel terrible about.

flaw number 50:
i always borrow money.
i never pay it back.

flaw number 72:
i forgot how to write a good poem.

Author notes

there are plenty more where that came from, this is just a sneak preview. ha! this is weirdly timed, i've actually been quite happy lately. whatever!

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  • ahh all of your so called flaws are what i suffer from too! but honestly half of these i dont see. maybe its because i never see you anymore
    (ps - way to ditch our adventure. i have no more time between today and pony farm. im bummin)

    • I really didn't mean to ditch it, I'm so sorry. In twenty days you have no more time?! That breaks my heart. I promise if you give me the address, I will write you long letters catching you up on the months of my life that you've missed - as long as you write me one, catching me up on the things I've missed with you.