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~Do You Still Love Me~

You ask me

Do you still love me

Yes i still love you

I'm investing in you

I cherish you

I value you

Maybe you treat me to good

Maybe i wasn't expecting

You to treat me like you do

I've been hurt in the past

Maybe that's why i question If we will last

i second guess myself  and think why me

Then i first guess myself and say  he loves me

Some days your to good to be true

Some days i want to hate myself for loving you

You personify the quote he to good to be true

Your turning this versatile women so good

Your everything i want in a man

I will be elated the day you take my hand,

These young days aren't moving fast enough

To build a better life with you

I can picture my belly growing big

I can see our adopted kids

I see our big house

I see are our dream cars

I see our yorkshire terriers in the backyard

I trust my life in your hands

I'm glad you ask for my opinions

I'm glad you take my feelings into consideration

I secretly love your compliments

I enjoy your thoughtfulness

Even though we were raised different

It's so fascinating

That we share common interest

Even though sometimes i think your

Thank you's ,I'm sorry's,and What's

Are a little over did

It let's me know that your

Paying attention in the moments

We both still have alot

To learn about life but no matter what

I know you will walk beside me

On those narrow sidewalks

I want to grow with you

Every lesson learned is one that i want to share with you

We have commitment,compromise,and loyalty

All these things are important to me

I'm glad i found my soulmate

Even though i'm still soul searching

I know your the one for me

I'm willing and ready to give up

My mind,body,soul,and my last name

I'll do anything to please you

I'll wear those heels you like

I'll even fix my hair the way you like

I'll always love you so good

That no one will ever be as good as me

So that you won't

Have the excuse to cheat

I want you on life's journey with me

But i got one question Mr.Rosario

After all we've been through

Do you stil love me

 

Author notes

This poem is from my own personal experience that i'm living right now.My boyfriend is my best friend.We've known each other since the 10th grade.He is my soul mate .In this life time it's rare to find the perfect person to complete you,but you know you've found them when they can complete your thoughts or sentences or they know you inside out.It's like in a past life time and in this life time we were brought back together again by faith.I cherish and respect him and value his love and honesty with me.There is no greater man meant for me and i'm thankful that i am allowed to encounter real love ,that is so rare these days to find,but with him by my side i don't have to worry about anything,besides the commitment we share in one another.

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Comments


  • Cbsweet
    May 1
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    awww thank you so much
    ^_^ it means alot

  • Well how to use your heart as pen,can be seen in this great poetry..love the beauty of your soul...my best wishes for you...

  • Cbsweet
    April 30
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    ^_^...
    awww
    Thank You
    xoxo Cbsw33t

  • Very interesting.

    I love the flow in this. Yet not really a flow, anyways, I love how you put "Do you still love me" at the end. Very well. I can relate to this, my bf is gone for awhile and wont be back for another month. Excellent work.

    Goodluck.

    ~XoXo Mollipop