Do you still love me
Yes i still love you
I'm investing in you
I cherish you
I value you
Maybe you treat me to good
Maybe i wasn't expecting
You to treat me like you do
I've been hurt in the past
Maybe that's why i question If we will last
i second guess myself and think why me
Then i first guess myself and say he loves me
Some days your to good to be true
Some days i want to hate myself for loving you
You personify the quote he to good to be true
Your turning this versatile women so good
Your everything i want in a man
I will be elated the day you take my hand,
These young days aren't moving fast enough
To build a better life with you
I can picture my belly growing big
I can see our adopted kids
I see our big house
I see are our dream cars
I see our yorkshire terriers in the backyard
I trust my life in your hands
I'm glad you ask for my opinions
I'm glad you take my feelings into consideration
I secretly love your compliments
I enjoy your thoughtfulness
Even though we were raised different
It's so fascinating
That we share common interest
Even though sometimes i think your
Thank you's ,I'm sorry's,and What's
Are a little over did
It let's me know that your
Paying attention in the moments
We both still have alot
To learn about life but no matter what
I know you will walk beside me
On those narrow sidewalks
I want to grow with you
Every lesson learned is one that i want to share with you
We have commitment,compromise,and loyalty
All these things are important to me
I'm glad i found my soulmate
Even though i'm still soul searching
I know your the one for me
I'm willing and ready to give up
My mind,body,soul,and my last name
I'll do anything to please you
I'll wear those heels you like
I'll even fix my hair the way you like
I'll always love you so good
That no one will ever be as good as me
So that you won't
Have the excuse to cheat
I want you on life's journey with me
But i got one question Mr.Rosario
After all we've been through
Do you stil love me
Author notes
This poem is from my own personal experience that i'm living right now.My boyfriend is my best friend.We've known each other since the 10th grade.He is my soul mate .In this life time it's rare to find the perfect person to complete you,but you know you've found them when they can complete your thoughts or sentences or they know you inside out.It's like in a past life time and in this life time we were brought back together again by faith.I cherish and respect him and value his love and honesty with me.There is no greater man meant for me and i'm thankful that i am allowed to encounter real love ,that is so rare these days to find,but with him by my side i don't have to worry about anything,besides the commitment we share in one another.
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Comments
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awww thank you so much
^_^ it means alot
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Well how to use your heart as pen,can be seen in this great poetry..love the beauty of your soul...my best wishes for you...


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Very interesting.
I love the flow in this. Yet not really a flow, anyways, I love how you put "Do you still love me" at the end. Very well. I can relate to this, my bf is gone for awhile and wont be back for another month. Excellent work.
Goodluck.
~XoXo Mollipop





