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Revenge

Your screams pierce my brain like splinters do the skin.
Your insults cut my veins like the knife does butter.
Your laughter stabs through my heart like the sword does muscle.
You will never know how you do this.
It all sends rage throughout my body.
I can’t hold back all of the anger.
Every time you do it,
The rage builds even more.
What must I do to get my point across?
Must I disappear?
Must I die?
Well then you’re out of luck,
I’ll be here making your life hell until eternity’s end.
All of it is revenge.
For everything you’ have caused me.
All of the anguish,
All of the agony,
You will pay for it forever.
And I will make sure of it.

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Written March 9th, 2004

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  • KrystleLynn
    September 12, 2004
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    Great

    Wow! I love this. It's very sad.