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Hayley's Warning

I have finally found the one for me
and I will not mercifully contend
with any man or god foolish enough
to steal my love again.
No, I will bring hell upon their door
and rain sulfur from the skies
on any man, woman, or child
until the last breath of me dies.
For I have not fallen so hard
and planned my future thus
with the girl of my dreams; my fiance,
to have it crumble into dust.
So this be my one time warning
as I place a ring upon Hayley's finger,
hurt this treasure of my life
and among the living you will not linger.

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  • Redsox24
    May 2
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    ur getting married? or was that hypothetical?
    great poem.
    and you continue to make me lonely...jerk. =P
    =)

  • Creative.

    this poem has a lot of emotion in it. its really good. i understand how you feel because i had 4 fiancees and they ended it with me and i just wanted to kill them but i forgave them.


  • RawrxXx16
    April 30

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    :D

    Awwwwwww
    All I have to say besides Awww is I love you!!!!!!!!!