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Bitch

I hate what i've become
i hate what we've done

there was so much love before
look at us now
what are we together for

we yell and fight
so much anger and pain
can't even sleep together at night

i fuck up
i'm not perfect
and nothing is enough

you feel like a dick
i feel like a bitch

i'm a bitch, a whore, a skank
i'm stupid, and fat
ugly and fake

i can't do anything right
for anyone
i am the cause of every fight

i can't be who you want
no matter how hard i try
i will never be good enough

Give me your worst comment, because the dead don't care

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  • Selithia
    April 30
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    ok chick, Honestly. The poem is great... Great flow, great meaning etc etc... And poetry is a good outlet for heart break and other pains... Why would you want bad comments though? Stop being so pessimistic and look at the bright side of things... Calm down, I dont think anyone is going to give you a bad comment over this one,Its great!
    -Sel ♥