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One Line

I said what I should have never said

The one line that would snap any hope

Now I cn live my life

Knowing that I ruined it

I can live my life hating myself

Without the pain of hope

That will never be

Give me your worst comment, because the dead don't care

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  • GothicFyre
    April 30

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    Whoa.....sad piece, full of pain and anger. Desperation too ... I really liked it. Well worded and well written.