I want you to sit with me
On the edge here with me
The stone cold on my back
Your rough hands all over
Bring your hips closer
Fill me with you
Pull back
Just to bring yourself to me again
We’re doing it on the edge
I want to feel the love
Want to feel the pain
We will own this rooftop
Up here above the city
We could see everything from here
But all I see is you and me
Up here on the edge
I am so hot for you
Bring your hips closer
Fill me with you
Pull back
Just to bring yourself to me again
We’re doing it on the edge
I want you to make me feel
Feel all the danger
Make me feel the pleasure
Till we both spill off the edge
Now we’re plunging to our deaths
Can you fuck me while we fall?
I want to meet my end with you
Fill me up before we die
Bring your hips closer
Fill me with you
Pull back
Just to bring yourself to me again
We did it on the edge
And as we reach our climax
Our bodies hit the ground
Entwined in blood and lust
I died with you in me
Author notes
This was inspired by Picture #1 of perfectsunset's Au "Sensuale" contest.
I don't think that this is a very good poem, but I liked the idea of it...
A contest entry
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Sizzling, I loved this you know that. Your epic lines of sex, not just sex, wild crazy, hot steam sex.
Love it
Favorite line
"You know what my favorite line was"
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Whoa this is one hell of a dark erotic poem. Hey if I had to go out I would love to go out cumming you know? This is dark but sexy erotic and enticing. Its like you want to be those two lovers laying it all out on the line for love. Good job good luck
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"can you fuck me while we fall"
omg wow that is all i can say
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Oh wow, a very different take
to the picture, but very good
indeed. Raw, intense emotions
expressed, and you've done so,
wonderfully.
Thanks for entering & best of luck
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WOW, I loved it! I really liked the sensuality of it. Great writing, I loved the question "can you fuck me while we fall" that was great.
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