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autumn

 

 

 

 

 

 

in the autumn light

velvet heads mimic the sun  -


scarlet afternoon

 

 

 

 

 

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#2 - haiku

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  • J Macabre
    July 3

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    I got this picture of a beautiful autumn late afternoon. Such a pretty picture painted with so few words. Exquisite.


  • Shadow of a Crow
    May 20

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    This is a really beautiful haiku. I am very impressed. I love the last line. I get a perfect picture of the red and orange autumn leaves. A whole story could be grabbed from these 3 lines. Great work!


  • DogFish silver member
    May 3
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    lovely !

  • Shadow of a Crow
    April 30
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    #2 is haiku. if you wish for a different choice, msg me.