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My Questions

Why are you here?
Why do u live?
Why is there heartbreak?
Why did I see you?

Why don't you ask?
Why don't you talk?
Why don't you see
that We could be more than this

When will you realize
that I am more than me now?

When will you look at me and say "I love you"?
When will you talk to me about nothing?
Why am I worrying that you wont?
WhY CaNt YoU aSk?!?!

Will you hold my hand?
Wil you give me  a hug?
Will you be there for me?
Will you love me forever and always?

Well, My questions would go on and on forever.
So I am done with you and all these worries and wonders!
So, now, I am sorry, but














Goodbye

Author notes

I made this about, well... all my poems are about the same thing pretty much so u can guess that It's about a guy. He won't ask so I am moving on, I think.

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  • TwiztidMaggot
    August 19

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    If the guy doesn't seem interested, yes the best thing to do is just... move on. You did an amazing job writing this piece! Keep up you great work, thanks for entering it in my contest, I wish you the best of luck.

    Twiztidmaggot