I got a call late last night,
it was you, saying that you
wanted me back.
I sat, blank faced with the
phone up to my ear. I can
hear him talking...but I'm
not paying any attention.
Suddenly I hear him yell my
name in to the phone, breaking
me out of my trance. He says he
loves me and wants to get back
together.
I hesitated for a minute, he had
broken my heart before, do I want
to take that chance again?
I was just about to say..yes..
when my alarm clock went off.
Switching it to the radio, the
perfect song was playing......
Carless Whisper by Seether...our song...
Author notes
prompt 7
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LOVED IT!!! this was amazing!! so awesomely fantastic! 
THIS piece should have won a trophy; it's really good. really really really good job on this one! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!!
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Beautiful poem. I really enjoyed the dream like feel to it. It was a cool twist. I think that it was an excellent feel.
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oh my god i loved it, keep on writing, lol i might have spelled that word wrong, keep is coming casey!!! cassie
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you spelled " phone " wrong but otherwise great piece you have here casey
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hehehe i fixed it.
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awesome write nightmare!!
i loved the emotions, and I can understand this quite well; having dreams like this that can make you smile one minute then frown the next. such great flow and depth to this. i loooooved it! keep up the good work!!
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Hmmmm, I wonder how many will be able to relate to this one... I know I can. But sometimes, with a dream so vivid, it is better to remember the reality of why we broke up with them in the first place... More times than not, it was for the best....
Great job on this one.
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