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Sometimes, Tomorrow

Sometimes the darkness makes us weak
sometimes the world just seems so bleak
sometimes the darkness makes us strong
to help us battle through the throng
sometimes you have to find your way
to let them know your here to stay
sometimes you have to break right through
to find out what makes you just you
somethimes the world seems so gray
and you just want to make them pay
just keep on fighting stay the course
and with yourself there's no remorse
with all the things that you have done
you'll find that you just might have won
sometimes, it's just making it until tomorrow.

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  • LionessK silver member
    April 30

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    welcome to allpoetry

    This reminds me of a song... and I cannot think of what it's title was.
    I can really hear the lyrical quality in these lines. Great rhythm to your words and very well put together.

    Thank you for sharing your words here with us all.

    Enjoy the site.



  • PerfectImperfection
    April 30

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    Nice flow to purpose in thought here. A bit redundant, yet also poignant in many ways.

    "with all the things that you ahve done" have

    Welcome to AP, best wishes!

    • BrandonStackhouse
      April 30
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      thanks much appreciated

      thanks for the comment and for the correction i have it fixed there now, im just here to find out if i have any talent for poetry it has long been a interest of mine and however it turns out ill probly keep on righting just for fun