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Brand New Day

We woke up to silence,
shattered by the pieces
of yesterday.

Reality slipped away;
we fumble through sheets
towards uncertain tomorrows...

built from broken promises.

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  • Errant Panther gold member
    May 15

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    an unusual concept to wake up to silence, this is a well constructed piece that grabs attention, good work.