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What's Inside

Any one
  who ever told you -

I was innocent

Apparently
  They never saw-

Deep into my soul

Please tell me what you think

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  • RavenTheWhite
    April 30

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    who can see deep into anyone soul? innocence is something we lost while in childhood. but very shot and conveys the message of other judging one another