Blossoms are blooming
on the Bradford Pear tree
Beautiful they are
( This is my first attempt at Haiku )
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Written March 20th, 2002
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Beautiful
Nice write keep writing (Lisa)
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This has 5-6-5 syllables. I would tweak this to make it more compact. Also, in L3, I would minimise the first alphabet of the word "beautiful" as it is distracting when in uppercase. The image here is nice.
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Oh, one of my favorite things about Ohio are those georgeous pear trees, almost makes me want to move back to Lexington. Thanks for the memories!
Jennifer -
Promise of good 2 come.
Susan, I am glad you liked "Streams In the South", part one of four parts. I will try to post the other three soon.
I cannot think of a pear tree without imagining van Gogh's painting of his pear tree. I know this form of poetry is hard to master. I have never tried it. It is good to read your first attempt.
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very nice...
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Crapford pears eh???
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ah you have 5, 6, 5, instead of 5, 7, 5.
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beautiful this is
:)
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