Quaking, shaking
Transcending soul
Among the dead
long gone
Where do you
belong?
Life remains
ingrained, apart
There is no death
of this kind
You merely play
possum
Getting up slowly
to walk
Away from
threats and lust
Gentle soul,
you must wake
See the wind
feel the sun
When they have
passed by
It shall truly
be done
Awaken now,
oh my soul
And carry
these burdens
Long shouldered
to the One
Love preordained
to rise again,
Rise to live!
One day it shall
all be well past,
Reflected from
An awakened,
Transcended soul
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Jesus Returns
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An awakened,
Transcended soul
love these lines
I love the feel of the poem
and what you are stating here
very well said on emotion
Hugs Angel♥
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I really wish we got to talk more! i miss takling to you!!! Anyways about the poem (since you hardly every write) it really awesome. i like it alot. i love the last line especially. I like the word transcended anyways, lol you know how i am with words!! lol.
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AUNTYYYY
i love this piece. love the short lines, and the words you used. this was a great write, so much depth! keep penning
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Annette,
A true blessing to read.
Love this, and the background adds to it.
Joe
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Joe!
Thank you! So nice for you to come by! Love the pic!
God Bless you Joe!
Annette
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Very Beautiful!
I enjoyed this very much and like all good poetry, feel that it can be interpreted in many different ways. Great metaphors and use of imagery and descriptive language. Very nice job!!
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Thanks so much Jeff!
Hey thanks for stopping by to read! It means so much.
Annette
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