A mighty wind rushes in a hue of twilight
Dancing wistfully upon the blue moonlit sea
Where white doves of peace take unto flight
And the moonlights dusky shadow follows me
The pale moon peaks through a sovereign sky
It dully answers unto night times call
Touching beauty where only angels fly
And shines upon the vibrant leaves of fall
As the moon hides beneath morning clouds
The orange sunrise begins to shine its face
With the warmth of glory that it shrouds
And wraps you in It’s soft quiet embrace
As the most beautiful day begins to draw nigh
The gentle yellow sun lays down it’s sweet head
Beneath a blanket of stars, that sings loves lullaby
Tucked away for the night in a cloud covered bed
The paint brush of this vibrant lovely world
is painted in place by Gods great demand
The one who’s paintbrush can make everything pearled
And is held in none other, than the masters hand
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A contest entry
- PREWRITES!!!!!!! by PhoenixFaith.
550 points, ended June 12, 44 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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This is just wow that is really all I can say. I loved each word. When you think about all the things God made you cant help but smile. This poem is one of the best I have seen
. Thank you for reading one of my poems that means a lot SH
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Nice flow and soft rhyme that felt like an evenings breeze. I know the ABAB schemes are difficult not end up being forced. The poem is reminiscent of those of an older generation.. A style that appeals to me, i might add.
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Awesome rhyme and beautiful imagery. Very lovely job with this piece. And I really like the title.
Best of luck and thanks for entering
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Beautiful rhyme. Good luck and thanks for entering my contest.
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Very Nice!
I think the masters hand is guiding yours. You write so beautifully, I only wish I had more time to spend reading the wonderful poems that are on this site. So many talented artists here. You are one of the finest poets I've read.
Thank You for dedicating the time to share these with us.
Rick
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The Master and only the Master paints the perfect sky. Very good poem. I have a question in the third verse and the second line, did you mean sunrise instead of sunset? You had just mentioned the moon hiding beneath the MORNING clouds so I wondered about that. I don't mean to be critical and that may be the way you intended it. If so that's OK. I did enjoy the poem because I do think the master is a great painter.
Blessings,
Ron
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oops lol thanks it was a mistake
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I really admire the imagery you use in this. The words you use sound beautiful together. The backround is very nice aswell.
Beaut write, dear.
-Bullets
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Superb
A very fine write, indeed. Imagery; rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done.
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I wish I could write poetry this good
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a wonderful show of talent penned here which grabs the reader by the hand and sparkles them into smiles of pleasure, admiration drips like honey from toasted waffles as i sit here and dream of poetry. thank you kindly for sharing.
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Bravo!
I am breathless, not just sleepless...lol, anyhoo, I seen so much imagery for the contest, It's ashame religion could offend and start debates, because it's not about denominations but The Master and His touch, His creation, because your last stanza sums it up for all of the beauty you wrote in this. Excellent, I bookmarked this one. Blessings.
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A relationship with God does not necessarily consist of any one religion. I just want to be careful not to offend those of faith that believe differently than me.
Your last stanza is lovely and should be included as the whole of the poem itself. In that one stanza, I think the word master should be capitalized, but that's just me.
This is a gorgeous entry, one that has many different facets of beauty and brilliance. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter, and I wish you all the best.
Love,
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when reading this poem without reading the last stanza in the author's notes::: I thought about God's creation. Love how you portrayed colors through natures miraculous scene. L,
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excellent~
This is beautiful...............
Such lovely imagery
Wonderful expressions of beauty in this poem sis
Love it............and it's a winner in my book
I just posted one come see mine when ya can
Hugs
Your sis
Susan~~~
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I think that it would be even better with the stanza in the author's notes! But I understand you having to follow the contest rules. The poem is very beautiful with lots of lovely imagery. I loved it good luck in the contest!
I huggles you
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Glad I have read your poem! Thank you for the inspirational refreshing one gets from reading...Rhyme and flow, and the spiritual beauty of all the spectrum of color, and the paintbrush of the Lord.....magnificent
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This make one feel so serene. I love the closing line you will be adding later. It seem quite appropriate to me. Your words carry such expressive beauty. Good luck in the conte4st Hun.
♥ Touchof1der
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This is so peaceful and relaxing. Makes me want to read it over and over. Very nicely done...
Stacy
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