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Cucumbers

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I see a cucumber on the table

with eyes and a story and some

            kind of fable

 

Green on the outside and every

      so juicy on the inside

 

This Cucumber can be Happy or

can be Sad,   it is up to me and

also up to you,   not to make it

            ever so blue

 

You can grow them in a garden

or buy them at your local store

Cucumbers you know what they

              are used for.

 

 

 

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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    May 1

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    LOL I love it you know what they are used for, You should of told us more about what it is used for.


  • Emmyb gold member
    April 30

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    lovely descriptions.

    This Cucumber can be Happy or

    can be Sad, it is up to me and

    also up to you, not to make it

    ever so blue


    I kinda like the idea of a cucumber turning blue! hehe. x