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Any Lie

Your blood pours out your nose,
Your eyes,
Seeps out your skin,
And I will watch,
I will bathe in it,
And splash in it,
And ponder at its beauty,
Because im that sick,
I want to see you dead that bad,
Just for my own pleasure,
For my own benefit,
Yes,
You hear that,
For a change,
I’m doing something for me,
Something is going to happen,
All I have to do it wait,
Wait till you screw up, 
Is that what you want to hear,
Because ill tell it to you,
I’ll tell you any lie,
To help you help yourself.

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  • ilovemyemo
    May 11
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    wow i loved that!!! its totaly how i feel all the time...its wonderful!! great job!!

  • well done. i could feel the emotions that you put in this peice. and im sorry that someone made you feel this way..not cool.
    'And I will watch,
    I will bathe in it,
    And splash in it,
    And ponder at its beauty,'
    Because im that sick,
    I liked how you described what you would do in the blood.
    I myself am very pissed off at a boy who i thought i loved but than was really just stabbing me in the back.


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    April 29
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    Oh wow, very vivid details and emotion in this. Hateful but SOO well written! I <3 it! Great work!