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A boys Last wish

Oh please Lord, just let me go

Just make sure that I die slow

Because I need to forget about all my pain and strife

But mostly to remember how much i hated life

I pity all of those that I hurt along the way

But to end this hell it was I who had to pay

Feeling love in my life is just a mass dilusion

I have to stop this pain, and I know the end conclustion

I know I'm the last thing that you all want to see

And I know the best solution is getting rid of me

So now I'll answer all your prayers and give you what you want

I'll take it all away from me, and you'll give me no second thought

Written By Beau Bennett 4/23/95

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