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Butterfly in a Jar

Flit about
Breathe in and out
Pause upon a blade of grass
Flutter away again
Bounce off the glass
Wishing to be free
Clawing and pounding
Reaching for the vastness I see
Someone let me out
Please open the lid
I need to flit through life
Touching down to socialize
Beautiful and welcome
Graceful and loved
No awkwardness
Never shy
Flying off into the breeze
Contented and pleased
How I dream of being
Like the butterfly
Forever free

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