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Written In Compassion

In the beautiful world alone,
Strolling in this park of poetry,
Just as it went about lonely,
Stepped in my life some one;

Some one more than an angel,
Crept into the story of my life,
For whose smile I can strife,
As she made my stars twinkle;

For she's some one I care for,
Don't know myself the reason,
May be this is a magical season,
Never did I witness it before;

May be because she's special,
A gift of God as a blessing,
She is some one I was missing,
May be she is really an angel;

For me although I can say,
She's equal to none other,
I find in her my daughter,
Whose smile takes me away;

I wish the Lord to bless her,
May the Lord protect her smiles,
Thousands of wishes across miles,
For my sweet and innocent daughter.

*~*Aun Ali*~*
{Lead by Example}

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Dedicated to my daughter on AP and some how otherwise...

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  • Lovely

    wow this poem really do shows ur love for ur ap daughter. This poem is very well expressed. good job.


    • Aun Ali
      June 23
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      Thank you my friend, perhaps I feel as if she's my actual daughter, don't know what has she done on me. Well I have written a new poem for her just few minutes ago: http://allpoetry.com/poem/5466323

      May God bless you too.

  • awwwww... that's for me!
    that was so sweet of you, i love it.. The thing i like more about it is the true emotions it holds in every line . this is truly a beautiful poem written by an amazing person whom i find comfort talking to, and whom i really care for!Those words will always accompany my heart, this is the nicest thing a person has ever done to me.. thanks a lot sweety..
    THANKS FOR TAKING THE TIME TO WRITE THIS!!
    BEAUTIFULLY PENNED


  • crimsondew
    April 29
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    Hope your daughter stays well...a lovely dedication

    • Aun Ali
      April 30

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      I am obliged by your words on thispoem, I love the way you comment on the poems of not only Aun Ali but of other writers in this community. My hearty wishes for you.

      Aun Ali


      • crimsondew
        April 30
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        I am glad my reviews are appreciated...and thank you for your kind wishes

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