A life changing moment,
one last chance in time.
The clouds part
and the universe opens up to your world.
You are given a chance,
one second to make right.
Time forgot
and life remembered.
Your last goodbyes,
all too short.
Your final wish,
just to make right.
What did you think?
Comments
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This is very beautiful and wonderful writing. I like the depth to this piece too. It is short but it carried me away. Keep writing.
Yours in Darkness
Wayne Leon
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loved this! very artistic and thoughtful. (the universe opens up to your world) lovely.
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very nice, kool.
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oh this one hits home , more than u could know, tears, hope the sun shines before the rain sets in god bless carley . beautiful meaningfull piece
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