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Confusion

Its always the same,
Waking in confusion,
Waking to learn you’re not there,
Yet another illusion,

Are you real?
Do you have a name?
I want to know the truth,
Do you feel the same?

Fear keeps me away from you,
What is your excuse?

What do you think?

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