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step up

stand up to the challenge,
can you take it,
will you succumb?
take the strain
the day is young
the night is cold

 

stand up to lifes challenge

step up to the plate

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  • PolarbearOpapatika
    May 2

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    This makes me think of someone telling a teen who just got his girl preganent to dont be a douchebag and step up and be a man. Ha! I love it


  • I will stand by you
    May 2

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    great, but kinda hard to tell what you are writing about. It can be about anything here which makes it great.


  • darkscorpia
    May 2

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    Very short and too the point, mysterious. I would capitalise the beginning of each line. Lines 6-7 contradict each other and lead to an awkward re-read. I would delete line 1 (the empty line).