I'm hiding a secret
Deep inside
Running away
From my messed up mind
Trying to overcome my fears
Stuck between what's fake and real
Wanting to love with all my soul but
This pain is taking a toll
You made a messed up girl
Lost inside an unknown world
Feeling lost with no where to turn
Wanting to be seen, yet to be heard
Flying away to an open sky
Hand in hand
Side by side
Obstacles come,
They may go but
My love for you,
Never gets old
Always defeated,
Never unturned
This is a life lesson learned
Author notes
I don't know but I like it. 
It just came to mind and I wrote everything I felt. Please be honest and tell me what you think of it. I put a lot of work into this
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Whats bad about it? I know something Is bad!
Comments
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oooh this is a great poem. i feel like i had to read between the lines to understand more deeply wat u wer feeling, and it was great. u might be able to improve it by making the meaning more clear, but i donno, i kinda liked it this way.
so yea, keep up the great wrk coz this poem was wicked!
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Your poem was pretty good. I enjoyed reading it. Nothing was bad about your poem. It is perfect the way it is.
-Jess
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I personally thought it was good. very good. But on suggestion I would of broke it into stanza's even though they may have been short stanza's The work shows int this piece. and no I don't think it is bad. Thank you for sharing this.
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