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Bread Poem- Warm-Baked Oven




 


































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gotta go, toast is done...

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  • condor gold member
    May 2

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    Excellent poem and i just love the way you used the toast to get your point across. Well spread...I mean, well said.


  • LAPoe gold member
    April 30

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    Well I'd plop down some bread for a slice of your poetry anyday!

    IMPRESSED doens't EVEN cover it!!!

    laurie

  • Malzy
    April 29
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    You never fail to amaze me! Youre so creative- but thats not news.


    • wbiro gold member
      April 29
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      hey, just shows I don't 'loaf' around hardy-har-har (pun)... lol, thanks for the amazement, need something to keep me going...


  • white stone
    April 29

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    This is cool. I've GOT to get my gold membership back.
    You are really creative. What is your profession?


    • wbiro gold member
      April 29
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      my profession... electronics tech / college instructor by day, poet / philosopher / composer / artist / comedian by night...

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