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Under My Skin

It's under my skin that I'm here alone
being shown that you  got away

and that I was left to figure out how to survive

with all the power I have left I stand up to testify

how you took away what I had left and flew it to the moon

how you can see yet you're so blind

I can feel the chills going down my spine as your memory crawls through under my skin

under my skin

no matter how much I try to brush you away you're still there

so I pick and I itch

I prod and I poke.......

but you're still there

why are you still here though

I haven't seen you in a lifetime?  

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  • DramaQueen469 gold member
    May 1
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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    This is a lovely poem, filled with emotion
    The last two lines are especially powerful
    Well done on a great start!!

    I hope that you come to enjoy this site as much as I do, and in the meantime if you have any questions at all please don't hesitate to ask me!!

    Best of luck with your future writing,

    Maria
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  • XxAloneXScaredxX
    April 29

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    This is very touching. I love it.
    You can picture it in your head if you read it slowly.
    Thats what i love about poems.
    Good work and keep on writing.
    ♥
    Tia