I want to look deep..and dive into your emerald aqua-blue eyes on a rare enchanting sapphire night,See them brightly glowing in twinkling trance,Burning in blitzy wild blue dance,Lapis Lazzuli moons,and crystal winds,electric storms,and sultry waves,shooting stars,and purple haze. I want to caress your perfect chisled face,and feel the rugged skins of your velvet smooths. I want to inhale your savage musk,kissing,and bruising in passionate,vivacious wanton lust. I want to press my molten sculptured bronze against the rocky contours of your delightful masculine heights,placing my fruits within your reach,howling as you grip each like a golden moulded peach. Writhing,and rhyming your pulsating rhythms,slow..and fast,brass locks,and tight. I want to straddle you like an untamed Vixen-Mare..and climax at the glittering hairs of crescendo's lair
A contest entry
- Create Desire (20th Contest) by Trixie08.
1000 points, ended June 10, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think ? please bear in mind that i'm not a poet though i am willing to learn and appreciate constructive criticism.Thanks.
Comments
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The paper sizzles.
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Woooooooo weeee!
LOL! DOWN GIRL DOWN!!! you went
crazy wild inside this sultry fantasy.
I love all your descriptions and metaphors.
This was a fascinatingly provocative write
which spoke in raw tribal tunes.
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Lol
Yeah i'm not sure what came over me the night I wrote this.
Thanks for your commy.
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This was breathtaking. By that i mean as I read I held my breath for each line made the picture more vivid. the last line was great. I really enjoyed this.
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so beautiful, sexy but very refined
so inviting and i close my eyes just remembering his face, but then it would be green eyes and emerald moons, just so lovely and imagery and words, superb my friend
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well well!
this is STEAMY! aahhh..yeah you sure did 'paint' a satisfying picture of desire! loved this my friend..
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now thats sensual and erotic and filled with love . very steamy .. ..
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very descriptive and I could easily picture this scene in my head. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
-Please do not respond till AFTER the contest
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Thanks
Its an old write,not here in AP.
Thanks.
I enjoyed writing this,be it poem or not.
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different, but I like it
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