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Mondays

Maniac Monday's here -
Oh my gosh!
New week,
Day that heralds
All the chaos and rush
You and I will see
Somewhat crazy, somewhat sweet.

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  • tearrsofthemoon
    June 23, 2009
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    I like this! It is short and sweet. I am sure it is many people's feelings of a Monday, the "oh why does the week have to begin!" and the chaos, but you put a little spin of hope for all new Monday's to come! :] Great piece. Thanks for sharing! ♥ tearrsofthemoon

  • trekkergirls bank
    June 17, 2009

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    interesting. Though since mondays are my day off I would consider them the day of rest. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.


  • Errant Panther gold member
    May 15, 2009

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    interesting perspective you add to this prompt, not seeing just the mundane routine but the window of opportunity also. good work.


  • Emmyb gold member
    April 29, 2009

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    very clever. very original and catchy.

    Chaos and Rush - yes yes yes that is definitely my monday morning. good luck in the contest. Im sure you'll do well. Emmyb