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Sometimes

sometimes i feel like a shadow
following everyone i see
sometimes i feel like the rain
pelting down like my own tears
sometimes i feel like the wind
rushing fast through the mind
sometimes i fee like a rock
hard and still
with no feelings at all
sometimes i feel like the sun
red and hot
glaring at my own self
sometimes i feel like the water
light and clear
running down the hill
sometimes i feel like a song
sweeping slowly
stealing feelings and overjoying
everone i see
but sometimes..iam just me
wondering on what else i could be....

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  • pop123
    May 8
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    Awesome. Its very nice. As all of ur poems are. Good work!

  • ea silver member
    May 2
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    Beautiful! Very enjoyable write...

  • Goodness! I'm stunned:

    You could be anything. And I love this. Very deep. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I loved everything and how it all came together. Nice job.

    Love,
    Evemauy


  • Evil 4ever
    April 29
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    NIce one!

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