sometimes i feel like a shadow
following everyone i see
sometimes i feel like the rain
pelting down like my own tears
sometimes i feel like the wind
rushing fast through the mind
sometimes i fee like a rock
hard and still
with no feelings at all
sometimes i feel like the sun
red and hot
glaring at my own self
sometimes i feel like the water
light and clear
running down the hill
sometimes i feel like a song
sweeping slowly
stealing feelings and overjoying
everone i see
but sometimes..iam just me
wondering on what else i could be....
Comments
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Awesome. Its very nice. As all of ur poems are. Good work!
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Beautiful! Very enjoyable write...


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Goodness! I'm stunned:
You could be anything. And I love this. Very deep. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I loved everything and how it all came together. Nice job.
Love,
Evemauy

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Thankyou so much!
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NIce one!

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